At the Pawn Shop

At the pawn shop, once again
it has been rough, to say the least
I've been broke since the first of the month..
and I don't get money for another two weeks.
there are two people ahead of me...
an hour ago there were four
all i can think of while standing here 
is all the *****I've lost before
jewelry or tools...whatever they'd take
to pawn or maybe sale
one time when i was standing in line
the cops came and took someone to jail
sometimes I see an old friend
sometimes I meet someone new
I guess it is safe to say...you just never know, 
what a trip to the pawn shop might lead to

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/12/2013 11:38:00 PM
They pay 30 cents on the dollar. Not much for the families treasures...Nice write
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Date: 7/9/2013 10:03:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:30:00 AM
Melissa congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:51:00 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/8/2013 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Melissa
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Date: 7/8/2013 3:19:00 PM
Mellissa, , a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
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