At the Pawn Shop- 15 Lines

I see tables, 
I see chairs, 
I see my granny's old underwear,
I see guns,
I see Jewelry,
I see really old books,
cranky old crooks,
I see lots and lots of stuff here at the 'ol pawn shop,
but my favorite thing of all,
is the old dinosaur jaw,
I get to the counter and find an old tattered box,
one that locks!
Now I'm real happy and I'll be comin' back to this old special pawn shop,
and I'll be'a'buyin'me that old box,
the one that locks!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Congrats on your winning poem.
Lanre Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:05 AM
cONGRATS DEAR FRIEND. GL
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
A  Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 12:52 AM
ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~
Pettit Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gracelyn.
Mims Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:22 PM
thanks, so much!
A   Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Gracelyn, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA
Mims Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:22 PM
thanks allot!
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