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At the Lake Hiku

a laid-back day ladybug hugs my finger . . . waves caress my toes

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Date: 2/24/2025 7:58:00 PM
So nice; how I'd enjoy a day like that. Just saying hello Andie :)
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Date: 2/24/2025 5:54:00 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent haiku! Janice
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Date: 2/23/2025 4:22:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/23/2025 8:51:00 AM
Such a lovely day for one to experience. Hugs...
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Date: 2/22/2025 11:06:00 AM
Well I thought I would take a hike?? Over to you.' To true.' I see many likey.'s Of the write above Too.' Can't be bad.' I guess its time to be on my Way o'er the galaxy of letters, and seas of rhyme Catch you another time.'
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Date: 2/22/2025 8:46:00 AM
What a beautiful scene! Gorgeous :)
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Date: 2/22/2025 8:42:00 AM
I love the second line the most sweet andrea, “ ladybug hugs my finger” how beautiful! I can imagine that as i read this! So picturesque and cute! Lovely hiku for brians contest. Best wishes always! Sending you light
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2025 11:50:00 AM
yes, it's for Brian.
Date: 2/22/2025 7:40:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write. Sounds peaceful to me. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Date: 2/22/2025 7:16:00 AM
Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 2/22/2025 4:05:00 AM
exquisite haiku, the place seems very "cool", thanks for the enjoyable read
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Date: 2/22/2025 1:02:00 AM
Love it! Every line a delight. I love ladybugs and the beach. Oh...good one. Is it for a contest?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/22/2025 11:50:00 AM
THANKS, Yes, it's for Brian. I missed his last contest. It flew right past me!

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