At the Lake Hiku

a laid-back day
              ladybug hugs my finger . . .
    waves caress my toes
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Thomas Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 7:58 PM
So nice; how I'd enjoy a day like that. Just saying hello Andie :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 5:54 AM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent haiku! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 4:22 PM
Back with congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Tor Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 8:51 AM
Such a lovely day for one to experience. Hugs...
Maverick Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 11:06 AM
Well I thought I would take a hike?? Over to you.' To true.' I see many likey.'s Of the write above Too.' Can't be bad.' I guess its time to be on my Way o'er the galaxy of letters, and seas of rhyme Catch you another time.'
Empress Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 8:42 AM
I love the second line the most sweet andrea, “ ladybug hugs my finger” how beautiful! I can imagine that as i read this! So picturesque and cute! Lovely hiku for brians contest. Best wishes always! Sending you light
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 11:50 AM
yes, it's for Brian.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 7:40 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku write. Sounds peaceful to me. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 4:05 AM
exquisite haiku, the place seems very "cool", thanks for the enjoyable read
Manassian Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Love it! Every line a delight. I love ladybugs and the beach. Oh...good one. Is it for a contest?
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 11:50 AM
THANKS, Yes, it's for Brian. I missed his last contest. It flew right past me!
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