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At the First Sight

The very first day I saw the light. It was her face, glowing in delight. She embraced me in ecstasy. She was my soulmate of infancy. She was my beloved mom whom i saw at first sight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/3/2024 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:02:00 PM
Hi Arif, wonderful limerick. can i suggest, you take out the word 'The' on the last line. Again great poem. Harry
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Date: 7/18/2018 4:15:00 PM
Thanks...Harry actually I'm new in poetry

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