At the First Sight

The very first day I saw the light.
It was her face, glowing in delight.
She embraced me in ecstasy. 
She was my soulmate of infancy.
She was my  beloved mom whom i saw at  first sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 6:17 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Horsman Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Hi Arif, wonderful limerick. can i suggest, you take out the word 'The' on the last line. Again great poem. Harry
Md Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks...Harry actually I'm new in poetry
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