At the Far Side of the Land

Let us ride into a sunset's silhouette to the far side of the land which leads to an autumn lake where white plumed swans pirouette Lets hold hands in golden fields Run through pleasant hay scent breeze which blows gently,suddenly brushing slightly across our cheeks On a blanket we would lay by the graceful willow tree 'Neath its boughs our dreams come true Trapped emotions be set free As the tangerine moonglow casts the softness of its light from the dusky blueblack sky I walk to the hidden old chateau with my alluring beau He would seal my waiting lips with the moistness of his kiss I would let him brush my hair with his fingers'tender care And as I wrap within his arms with still tears upon my face He would harvest what he sowed My pure heart in deep embrace
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Smith Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:57 PM
: )....love your poem....good night Charmaine
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 8:14 AM
What can I say Charm?....each poem of yours tempts to be read and reread, for fear of missing out on something. You offer overflowing brilliance of romantic feelings, and imagery is forever at the forefront. I love the tangerine moon glow and the dusky blue-black sky. This must go to my faves. Have a lovely weekend (but not too windy!) // paul
Hicks Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 11:43 AM
Take me with you the next time you go. I do wish to see that Tangerine Moonglow! :D You do have a romantic soul don't you?
Mcdaid Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 1:13 PM
this is so touching charmaine very beautifully painted piece dear friend excellent pen
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic and passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..My mother was one of the best cooks..She did not let one mistake stop her even in hard times with very little she made food taste very good..Sara
Lawless Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Charmaine, loved the first three lines. They could stand alone and fuel the imagination of readers. Nicely done.
Yvonne Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Excellent as always Char, happily married and still you make all the men drool. That my friend is great poetry.
Goswami Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Beautiful love...Love for Love...I enjoyed your love...Best wishes to you my dear POET...
Austin Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 2:58 PM
What could be more picturesque - "The dusky, blueblack sky" "The old chagteau" Good stuff, Char. Love, daver
Falotico Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 1:42 PM
I've missed your beautiful poetry!! I will promise to make more time for the soup. If your on FB friend me ! Xox Michael
Chircop Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Im sorry Michael,Im.not on.fb.Tnks so much for reading
Baez Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Now that is one killer last line :) Most exquisite Charmine, I am jealous of this beau character. Perhaps the next time you meet with him, you can ask him to wear a mask of my face. :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Very nice poem, Charmaine! Cheers! :) Xxxx D.
Cayton Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Yea letters of love in poetetic finest, alluring the fine warm glow of these fields of dreams. You are Islamic aren't you? Jay Del Fierro, Riccardo Del Fierro.. remember you two were on fanbox.com. he wrote and called me with a flower as he bends to breeze, recited it. then it became flowers. Sure its political.
Chircop Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 9:43 AM
I dont know. who Riccardo Fierro is,bit I do remember a Jay Fierro writing here.I dont know what fanbox is or what is political in my love poem? Made me smile : )
Chircop Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Pardon..I was never on fanbox dear friend,and nor am I islamic.I am a roman catholic,and islamic people are people too.Hope you dnt have a problem with that.Read my bio If you ever wish to know who I am..I postwd a poem called Who am I..Tnks
Smith Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 8:48 AM
You had me at hold hands in golden fields....romance and seduction... My favorites... Hugs Tim
Mcdaid Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 8:08 AM
wow i have to say charmaine dazzling piece held me from start to finish dear friend excellent pen
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