At the End She Became Invisible

after marriage she's happy 
                               nothing was there to be unhappy
                           they wanted a child so went to a doctor 
                              but by losing smile returned sadly 

                                 extreme invisible heart pain
                              passes through her bloody vein
                                no one hears her inner voice
                              suffers from unkindness disdain 

                             she's lonely friend of herself now
                               in biting silence suffers woe
                              for this reason she's divorced
                              tear drops her husband sowed

                                 a sweet home she's lost
                            love always not reimburse cost
                                 only fault she had in life 
                              for infertility she had no child

                               at end she became invisible
                                  ended life of all horrible
                              her nothing then no one seen
                          now enjoys she her eternity's peace   

For contest: Sponsored by SKAT 

Note: In our family life we see many women are badly tortured for having no child birth and husband divorces and get married again. In such life's situation what an woman faces invisible pain which other family members don't feel and the lovely hubby burns out the love of her heart. What a tragic things happen in our so called civilized societies, it's shame. One of the practical facts is penned in this poem.
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A   Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 12:49 AM
BL, Congrats on your awesome Being Invisible win...Love LINDA
Devnath  Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Thanks my lovely *friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Raina Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 3:30 PM
You expressed the bitter truth.....congrats on your win in the contest..
Devnath  Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Chansarkar Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:39 AM
There is painful beauty in tragedy!
Devnath  Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
Misra Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Dev, you've so truly brought out the self-inflicted paun as well as from others in a society which demeans barren women and reduces them to nothingness where they literally become invisible. Theme very well brought out and you deserve the win. From me a definite 7!
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for leaving very nice words for me with 7. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Such a sad happening a woman may have to face in this culture, BL, and you have expressed this sorrow so well in your poem. Congratulations on your fine win in this first Premiere Contest! Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Deep write BL. In my mind, there is no love in a man who marries only for children.
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thanks for leaving few valuable words with appreciation. Loved always, bl
Flower Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:39 AM
A well written one...congrats on your placement, BL. :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Hello BL, Congratulations on your Invisible win. I thank you for the entry. I have a blog up, describing the experience of running my first premiere contest. blog name--- >"My first experience was not as easy ... :( DEPRESSION" drop by and enjoy the few I did place. Forever **SKAT**
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation. Certainly i will visit to know your first experience about depression. We are waiting to read nice from you. i think no one should miss the God gifted precious life. i say take easy, feel easy, do easy, smile easy.... i am going to write a new poem to be dedicated to you. Loved always, always...., bl
Canerdy Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:14 AM
A 7 for sure, BL. Congrats on your win. Janice
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for wishing me congratulation with high rating. Loved always, bl
Rycroft Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 4:03 AM
A sad but well written poem well done xx
Devnath  Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 4:16 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Such a sad ending BL in the end she lost everything:-( :-( hugs jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 4:15 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
Onclaud Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 6:28 PM
ohh, tragic ending, bl... lovely piece!..huggs
Devnath  Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
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