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A 'Panopticon' is a watchtower overlooking a circular prison. The glass of the look out is mirrored, so that inmates cannot look inside. They assume, that they are constantly watched and eventually internalise the warden's prescriptions and make them their own.

The idea was originally put forward by the utilitarian Jeremy Bentham as a serious proposal for prison reform.

Michel Foucault adapted the idea to a philosophical construct and suggest to us, that we can break the walls by 'extimating' what does not belong to us, rather than internalising like sheep to the slaughter.

 

 

 

Breaking free from collusion A watch tower stands tall a look out in the circular prisons surrounded by wardens laying down prescriptions and rules with us in the centre fragmented in dead ends and schisms mirrored glass no one inside we internalise as obedient fools At the gate high walls conscience barriers and road blocks imagined barbed wire where we pay fines in constant delusion monitored in constriction we fail to walk outside of that box abide by dogma norms lack vision to approach our confusion Afraid of cul de sacs dead ends stop signs for individual drive we halt and abide arrested immobilised for society’s sake accept torturous certainty admit to all guilt and as we shrive cannot distinguish from needs what is causing us mind ache Roundabout’s exits guarded by our very own straight jackets we spin around like puppets on strings to our master’s delight The ‘panopticon’ demands obedience and we cannot attack it for lack of conviction rebellion introspection rigorous insight Unless we break free from chains of what others demand disregard our dreams our beauty default on individual virtue the road ends at a four way stop where forever we stand disunited abolished forgotten and constant imagined taboo 4th January 2017 Written for contest: At the end of the road

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Date: 2/13/2017 12:09:00 PM
So nice piece with wonderful vocanulary. Congrats.
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Date: 2/13/2017 7:44:00 AM
I see why this is a winner, Kai - very deep, very powerful piece! Congratulations on your win! I love it and it's a 7 in my books! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 2/4/2017 9:31:00 PM
So creative, so deep, so emotional with rich vocabulary Congrats Kai to win on your wonderful poem.
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Date: 2/5/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Anisha. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 1/19/2017 9:40:00 AM
Very deep, well thought out write Kai.
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Date: 2/5/2017 2:42:00 AM
Thank you James. I appreciate that. Wishes, kai
Date: 1/14/2017 12:16:00 AM
What a paradigm to understand. Its a metter of - straighten up and fly right. It could be an answer or a nightmare where psychopaths breed. To face a mirror instead of a guard is a twist in my thinking. Superbly written
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Date: 1/14/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you Jannie. The psychopaths are the ones ruling society and we are the ones allowing them to do so. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 1/6/2017 5:56:00 AM
Very good I agree with Darren and everybody else a really powerful poem x
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Date: 1/14/2017 2:17:00 AM
Thank you Wendy. The mirrors can be shattered. Wishes, Kai
Date: 1/5/2017 12:59:00 PM
Man this is good, and is is so true... We all behave in a certain way already, we are being watched. Our every word typed in for Poetry Soup is being recorded somewhere, every step we take. And still, we retain individuality and can be courageous in our own way, if only we think out of the box, the Panopticon.
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Date: 1/14/2017 2:16:00 AM
Thanks Darren. I appreciate that. Trying my best to see beyond the mirrors. Wishes, Kai
Date: 1/4/2017 11:03:00 PM
A very thought provoking poem on many levels, Kai.
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:46:00 AM
Thank you Afzal. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 1/4/2017 9:03:00 AM
I totally agree with Andrea, Kai:) you use each poem as a base to teach something new, I liked this positive one especially:) a 7:)
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Jo. I appreciate your great compliment. Kai
Date: 1/4/2017 8:19:00 AM
A lot of creative thought put into this one. It's unique among the poems dealing with this theme, Kai. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:43:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Many wishes to you, Kai

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