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At the End of the Day

This crimson afternoon is getting late with evening shadows growing ever long. The sun is knocking loud at nighttime’s gate as nature’s choir is singing evening’s song. The western sky is painted coral hues as day surrenders to the evening dusk, and daylight slowly starting to diffuse while giving way for darkness to unhusk. In emerald treetops birds begin to roost, as golden harvest moon comes into view. The sun descends as night is introduced, and coral sky fades to a midnight blue. When daylight’s final breath gives up a sigh, and puts an end to nature’s bright ballet; like yellow diamonds twinkling in the sky, with eagerness, the stars come out to play.
July 23, 2018

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Date: 7/31/2018 3:22:00 PM
Lovely, John. Congrats on your top win.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/31/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, Line, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/28/2018 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery. Well done!
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/28/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 7/28/2018 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, beautiful imagery in colors. I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.. . Hugs Eve
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/28/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 7/25/2018 3:53:00 PM
how you enchant with this radiant piece, john...greeat job..huggs
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/25/2018 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Nette, I appreciate it so much. John
Date: 7/23/2018 10:09:00 PM
The enchantment of approaching nightfall is beautifully displayed through your inspiring imagery, John. Exquisite in every way. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/24/2018 6:13:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I appreciate it. Best wishes. John
Date: 7/23/2018 2:39:00 PM
It was like fast forwarding afternoon to night, well described John. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/23/2018 3:04:00 PM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it. John
Date: 7/23/2018 1:22:00 PM
Your thoughts take me there in the moment. Such beautiful images you paint with your words. Nature is very inspiring. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/23/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Brandy, yes nature is so very inspiring when we take pause from our busy lives and enjoy the it. Glad I was able to take you away for a moment. John
Date: 7/23/2018 8:07:00 AM
Nicely done John...has a smooth and joyful feel...^WW^
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/23/2018 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, WW, I appreciate your comments. John

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