At the End of the Day

This crimson afternoon is getting late with evening shadows growing ever long. The sun is knocking loud at nighttime’s gate as nature’s choir is singing evening’s song. The western sky is painted coral hues as day surrenders to the evening dusk, and daylight slowly starting to diffuse while giving way for darkness to unhusk. In emerald treetops birds begin to roost, as golden harvest moon comes into view. The sun descends as night is introduced, and coral sky fades to a midnight blue. When daylight’s final breath gives up a sigh, and puts an end to nature’s bright ballet; like yellow diamonds twinkling in the sky, with eagerness, the stars come out to play.
July 23, 2018
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Gauthier Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Lovely, John. Congrats on your top win.
Gondolf Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Thank you, Line, I appreciate it. John
Gentry Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery. Well done!
Gondolf Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, Susan.
Roper Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, beautiful imagery in colors. I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.. . Hugs Eve
Gondolf Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Thank you, Eve, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Onclaud Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 3:53 PM
how you enchant with this radiant piece, john...greeat job..huggs
Gondolf Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 6:11 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Nette, I appreciate it so much. John
Ashley Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 10:09 PM
The enchantment of approaching nightfall is beautifully displayed through your inspiring imagery, John. Exquisite in every way. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Gondolf Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 6:13 AM
Susan, thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I appreciate it. Best wishes. John
Cunningham Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 2:39 PM
It was like fast forwarding afternoon to night, well described John. Tom
Gondolf Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it. John
Nicole Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Your thoughts take me there in the moment. Such beautiful images you paint with your words. Nature is very inspiring. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Brandy, yes nature is so very inspiring when we take pause from our busy lives and enjoy the it. Glad I was able to take you away for a moment. John
Warrior Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 8:07 AM
Nicely done John...has a smooth and joyful feel...^WW^
Gondolf Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, WW, I appreciate your comments. John
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