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At the Door

He stood and faced the door, what a journey brought him here ? a life lived as a whore. He sold himself for power and wealth and when the path was long and wide he cast his friends and loves aside but now here is the door. Before came this obstruct his motto was his luck unlucky those he trod upon as he rushed on and on and on gained wealth from all the sin he’d done, light flickers ‘neath the door. Footsteps behind the door transfixed he sees the handle turn and feels the agony of burn pulled in behind the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/6/2017 3:05:00 PM
Hello Rick, I feel sorry for the person in this poem.When he heard the foot steps behind the door, he should of found a way out of the room.I enjoyed the poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/10/2017 2:41:00 PM
I understand Nick,I accept your apology, I have double vision.I wish you the best.Nick, I want you to know I enjoy your poetry. Have a nice evening my friend I will be reading your poetry.
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Rick Howarth
Date: 12/9/2017 6:27:00 AM
I do apologise Darlene, what a beautiful name. Please excuse my error in my original reply I have difficulty with this Macular problem that is stealing my sight
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/8/2017 8:36:00 PM
My name is Darlene De Beaulieu I enjoyed your poem.

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