At the Concession Stand

Ordering a 'Mustard-and-Catsup'
  I was ever-so-rudely refused

  Not a happy camper at all ~
      'Dog-on-it,' I mused
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 12:33 PM
So very cute. How about some onions????? Have a blessed day.............
Wolf Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 2:30 PM
I knew I forgot something besides the relish. lol. Thanks, Paula. ~ Oscar Mayer
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 6:01 AM
cute, Gershon ~
Wolf Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 4:02 PM
Take out that comma, Line, and you'll have 'cute Gershon.' -- Though you're not 'comma Line'
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:11 PM
Like it!
Wolf Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 4:02 PM
OK, Thumbs up, Kim.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:27 PM
HelloGershon, oh you missed the bun? Just wondering. Enjoy your evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Hello Gershon, I am pleased that i made you laugh. enjoy your day my freiend.
Wolf Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Ha, ha, ha! Your comment is funnier than my little ditty, dog-on-it! ~ Pass the relish too, Darlene
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