At the Concession Stand

Ordering a 'Mustard-and-Catsup' I was ever-so-rudely refused Not a happy camper at all ~ 'Dog-on-it,' I mused

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Date: 4/21/2021 12:33:00 PM

So very cute. How about some onions????? Have a blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/21/2021 2:30:00 PM

I knew I forgot something besides the relish. lol. Thanks, Paula. ~ Oscar Mayer

Date: 4/20/2021 6:01:00 AM

cute, Gershon ~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/20/2021 4:02:00 PM

Take out that comma, Line, and you'll have 'cute Gershon.' -- Though you're not 'comma Line'

Date: 4/19/2021 7:11:00 PM

Like it!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/20/2021 4:02:00 PM

OK, Thumbs up, Kim.

Date: 4/19/2021 4:27:00 PM

HelloGershon, oh you missed the bun? Just wondering. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2021 10:07:00 AM

Hello Gershon, I am pleased that i made you laugh. enjoy your day my freiend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/19/2021 4:33:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha! Your comment is funnier than my little ditty, dog-on-it! ~ Pass the relish too, Darlene