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At the beach I follow the sand like the water follows the seashore cool wind in my face, the sun at my back, all the world is an Apple Conversations with Angels and God's of the Universe are easy as rain, when I am in solitude's reign. The trees are a talking while I go a walking, oh what a view Children building sandcastles make a picture perfect painting, of both innocence and awe... With an acrylic sky that paints itself with blues, whites and pinks I hover my eyes over a mingling blushing sunset. At the end of day, it never fails to arrive, bringing with it both beauty or deliverance it shines and graces the land, without askance. At the beach the seagulls soar o'er promising horizons, while I sit on my blanket and watch a latent un-discovered sun, rise off the calm blue waters. Here where the crunch of an apple can be heard over ocean foam, I allow my heart to release a flower, before the sweet magenta gloam.

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Date: 5/1/2023 11:13:00 PM
A sandy beach, full of life in your poetry! =)
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Date: 4/26/2023 4:57:00 PM
wonderful Rose, i could hear the waves, feel everything on the shoreside, i could feel emotion by the sea, thanks a lot for the emotionnal sharing
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Date: 4/26/2023 2:58:00 PM
Hi Mystic, Your well-written write about a day at the beach is so descriptive. It had great content and imagery. Hey, I'm ready to grab my beach necessities and head off to the beach. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/26/2023 3:42:00 AM
A very creative and very descriptive work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it. I would like to go to the beach before it gets too hot, but alas, that probably won't happen this year. Thanks for sharing this work and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/26/2023 1:51:00 AM
Beauty can be everywhere, especially near the sea. The pity is I always feel cold.
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Date: 4/25/2023 9:52:00 PM
This is absolutely lovely, Vie:)
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Date: 4/25/2023 2:23:00 PM
Rose, this is a beautiful poem!
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Date: 4/25/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Daniel I appreciate your visit :)
Date: 4/25/2023 11:50:00 AM
- I love the sound of the waves ... every day I walk along the coast (not beach) - A wonderful poem, Vie Rose :)
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Date: 4/25/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine, how fortunate you are to be so close to water every day, would love to walk the shore there too one day :)

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