At the Altar

at the altar one word changing everything Published in Bottle Rockets #42 2020 Posted on January 30, 2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/31/2019 11:14:00 PM

I like where Tim was going (drop down). Once again, my poetic friend, you have left your readers room to roam and widely range. Nicely done! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/1/2019 2:44:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2019 10:15:00 AM

Well, it could be I do or no, I don't, no way, forget this ceremony right!! Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/31/2019 6:10:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by and leaving your comment, Sara.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/31/2019 12:40:00 AM

Quite an intriguing poem. Wonderful makes me think, one word? Cant be "I Do"..... Maybe it is when asked, do you take this man? ..."No" Maybe I think too much! :0

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/31/2019 7:10:00 AM

I... "DO"

Lunita Blanca

Date: 1/30/2019 6:50:00 PM

Speaks volumes my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/30/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Arbol.