At the Altar

at the altar
one word
changing everything



Published in Bottle Rockets #42 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 11:14 PM
I like where Tim was going (drop down). Once again, my poetic friend, you have left your readers room to roam and widely range. Nicely done! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 2:44 PM
Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and compliment.
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Well, it could be I do or no, I don't, no way, forget this ceremony right!! Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Thanks for dropping by and leaving your comment, Sara.
Mcguire Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 12:40 AM
Quite an intriguing poem. Wonderful makes me think, one word? Cant be "I Do"..... Maybe it is when asked, do you take this man? ..."No" Maybe I think too much! :0
Gauthier Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 7:10 AM
I... "DO"
Blanca Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Speaks volumes my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Arbol.
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