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At winter’s departure - though I feel glad - I must remember that like human beings, Mother Nature needs a rest from her growing season; she will reawaken at spring equinox, shaking off her pretty white lace blanket. For the vernal season, Mother Nature dons her most beautiful green dresses. From month to month I see her change adornments - in March subtle; In April and May, though, she’s her fanciest as colorful buds peek out from her gown! March 29, 2016 for the Celebration Contest of Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 3/1/2019 11:27:00 AM
Drown in flowers wearing a beautiful gown in the shape of a crown and soft like pillow made out of down.
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Date: 1/25/2019 8:49:00 AM
This is so very nice. Absolutely love it.
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Date: 4/17/2018 6:25:00 PM
Sweet, Andrea. We do forget Mother Nature needs her beauty sleep.
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Date: 2/19/2017 4:46:00 AM
I love the personification of the seasons here especially the "beautiful green dresses" part. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:52:00 PM
You left out the myriad shades of Autumn. I like the twin, reversed etheree form....
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Date: 4/24/2016 12:05:00 PM
I had to leave out autumn. I was only permitted in this challenge to do winter and spring!
Date: 4/6/2016 11:07:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "Celebration Win." LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2016 1:30:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Great metaphor of the different dresses of Mother Nature, nice imagery. Congrats on your contest win. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 4/4/2016 11:30:00 AM
An amazingly beautiful etheree, Andrea!
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:52:00 AM
Andrea I always feel your passion when you write! Keep up the good work because your works inspire a lot people to write too! I'm grateful I'm that I've met a poet who writes amazingly! :) - HANS
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Date: 4/4/2016 8:19:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful etheree on Winter and Spring. The words flow so gently down the page. An excellent write Andrea. I Love your song of Winter and Spring, your song sings in its beauty. Bring on the heart of the Spring. A seven and into my faves....Mike.
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Date: 4/4/2016 5:04:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on you win.
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:55:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win with this very awesome poem Andrea..
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Date: 4/4/2016 2:45:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your brilliant WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/3/2016 2:23:00 PM
I so appreciate the artistic composition and concept. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/3/2016 11:49:00 AM
Lovely beauty in art... Congrats...
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Date: 4/3/2016 10:44:00 AM
Congrats on your win well written xx wendy
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Date: 4/3/2016 10:19:00 AM
It is also my favorite form. Good Composition. Congrats Andrea. Hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 4/3/2016 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your placement in the contest for this lovely poem.
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Date: 4/3/2016 7:48:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/3/2016 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/3/2016 6:08:00 AM
Simply so very beautiful Andrea congrats on 2nd place Hugs
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Date: 4/2/2016 8:16:00 AM
A very good written and great style of poem x
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Date: 3/30/2016 5:50:00 PM
Beautiful depiction of mother nature, buds peek out from under her gown, just so lovely.
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Date: 3/30/2016 5:37:00 PM
How pretty, the white lace blanket. I think you did well with this Celebration poem, and a good idea to make Mother Nature change her dress (in Idaho she's a bit insane, always changing her clothes midday, when none sees it coming) ... best of luck, Andrea!
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Date: 3/30/2016 1:49:00 PM
Yep! She's at her best and sweetest in the springtime. You bring her to life nicely. Love, daver
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