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At Rainfall's End

At rainfall’s end worms wriggle on sidewalks . . . robins' emergence April 17 for Line Gauthier's One Haiku Poetry Contest

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 4/20/2021 8:59:00 PM

beautifully written on the activities of worms and robins after rainfall

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/19/2021 6:59:00 AM

Nice Haiku with beautiful imagery Andrea... Best wishes... Hugs... ~ Ani

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/18/2021 4:03:00 PM

Ain't that just the way, eh? I was rooting for the worms in the second line ... then came the third. The visual in this poem is so easy to picture. That's what haiku is about ... inviting us into those moments.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/18/2021 3:53:00 PM

nicely done, andrea! i can picture it perfectly!

Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2021 10:27:00 AM

Hungry robins ready for a snack!, Very nicely penned Andrea, hugs

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/18/2021 10:06:00 AM

Worms have to be careful they don't get squashed. Nice springtime write.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/18/2021 8:30:00 AM

Ah! You write these well, Andrea:) loved it absolutely:)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/18/2021 7:28:00 AM

Andrea, love this Haiku...."worms wriggle on sidewalks".... Happy Spring! Take Care, Paulette

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/18/2021 5:26:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Andrea! Janice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/18/2021 2:59:00 AM

Poor worms. But everyone must eat.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2021 1:46:00 AM

Love the image Andrea, caught in the moment. Tom

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/17/2021 5:21:00 PM

Hi Andrea, What a lovely “ Spring” haiku. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the test of your day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/17/2021 4:52:00 PM

Love it... would never have thought of it and it's so good :) God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/21/2021 9:30:00 PM

it was hard not using adjectives but I see it was acceptable after all, now viewing the winners!!