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At Rainfall's End

At rainfall’s end
worms wriggle on sidewalks . . .
robins' emergence

April 17
for Line Gauthier's One Haiku Poetry Contest

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2021

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Mahtab Bangalee

April 20, 2021 at 8:59 PM

beautifully written on the activities of worms and robins after rainfall

Anitha Jayasankar

April 19, 2021 at 6:59 AM

Nice Haiku with beautiful imagery Andrea... Best wishes... Hugs... ~ Ani

April 18, 2021 at 4:03 PM

Ain't that just the way, eh? I was rooting for the worms in the second line ... then came the third. The visual in this poem is so easy to picture. That's what haiku is about ... inviting us into those moments.

April 18, 2021 at 3:53 PM

nicely done, andrea! i can picture it perfectly!

April 18, 2021 at 10:27 AM

Hungry robins ready for a snack!, Very nicely penned Andrea, hugs

April 18, 2021 at 10:06 AM

Worms have to be careful they don't get squashed. Nice springtime write.

April 18, 2021 at 8:30 AM

Ah! You write these well, Andrea:) loved it absolutely:)

Paulette Calasibetta

April 18, 2021 at 7:28 AM

Andrea, love this Haiku...."worms wriggle on sidewalks".... Happy Spring! Take Care, Paulette

April 18, 2021 at 5:26 AM

Excellent haiku, Andrea! Janice

Victor Buhagiar

April 18, 2021 at 2:59 AM

Poor worms. But everyone must eat.

April 18, 2021 at 1:46 AM

Love the image Andrea, caught in the moment. Tom

April 17, 2021 at 5:21 PM

Hi Andrea, What a lovely “ Spring” haiku. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the test of your day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

April 17, 2021 at 4:52 PM

Love it... would never have thought of it and it's so good :) God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2021 at 9:30 PM

it was hard not using adjectives but I see it was acceptable after all, now viewing the winners!!

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