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At Peace

Down by the cool brook

Switches swaying in thy breeze

My heart now serene

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Line Gauthier

October 26, 2018 at 11:24 PM

Lovely emotion, White Wolf.

Roy Pett

July 7, 2017 at 4:57 AM

Brilliant Haiku WW, you've created a lovely image, definitely peaceful and serene, amazing talent, :)) Now I'm curious what is the meaning of your avatar?

Roy Pett

July 7, 2017 at 6:59 AM

Just read My creation myth and the Awen, brilliant, thank you.

White Wolf

July 7, 2017 at 5:03 AM

Ah, the Awen! As deep in meaning as Druidry itself! The word Awen is a Welsh, Cornish, and Breton word for (poetic) inspiration! For a fuller understanding of the symbol, read my poem: My creation myth and the Awen! Thank you, Roy /|\

Daniel Turner

July 6, 2017 at 10:45 PM

Pretty mellow write Wolfie. Ya see, real men do write poetry:)Excellent haiku!

White Wolf

July 7, 2017 at 1:54 AM

Haha, Just a minute, I'll take my pink top off! Thanks, Daniel /|\

Funom Makama

July 4, 2017 at 8:54 AM

Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..

White Wolf

July 4, 2017 at 9:03 AM

Thank you, Funom! You just made my day /|\

Gregory Richard Barden

July 3, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Beautiful Haiku ... Haiku is a favorite form of mine, and while I don't post a lot of my Haiku, it is very special to me. This is wonderful!

White Wolf

July 4, 2017 at 9:03 AM

Thank you, Greg /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 3, 2017 at 5:48 AM

Peaceful and inspiring, dear WW!

White Wolf

July 3, 2017 at 5:49 AM

Thank you so much, my friend /|\

Maria Williams

July 3, 2017 at 3:24 AM

Nice Haiku in it's serenity 'Mr Dream Catcher' WW...Maria

White Wolf

July 3, 2017 at 3:27 AM

Thank you kindly, Maria! I'm looking at my dream catcher now above me! /|\

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2017 at 10:58 PM

At my sister's house and having fun!!

White Wolf

July 2, 2017 at 11:15 PM

Haha, live it up /|\

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2017 at 10:57 PM

this is so gorgeous, Budgie. I love the way your haiku matches with the picture.

White Wolf

July 2, 2017 at 11:14 PM

You always pay attention to detail, Andrea! And a great curious mind you have also, You have been the only one who has ever asked the meaning of my avatar! /|\