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At Loch Ness

Staring hard 
she believed
it was there.

But no luck
as she prayed
for a glimpse.

As she sighed
it crept up.
Her surprise...

a tricube written 28th January for Sara's contest

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2023

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Anne-Lise Andresen

January 31, 2023 at 6:26 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem -

January 30, 2023 at 6:14 AM

Things creep up on us, when our eyes are elsewhere…our belief not in the seen but in the unssen. Congratulations!

January 30, 2023 at 1:58 AM

A Big surprise, and a big congratulations on your win!

Christuraj Alex

January 29, 2023 at 9:04 PM

Great story with suspense. Beautiful. Congratulations!

January 29, 2023 at 12:45 PM

Thanks for sharing and for participating in my contest. The big question still goes on is there or is there not a Loch Ness being. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

January 29, 2023 at 8:25 AM

Adorable Jack. Congratulations on your win!

Jennifer Proxenos

January 28, 2023 at 8:09 AM

Surprise, surprise - her prayers were answered! A clever tricube Jack, well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings.DHD

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