At Least I Tried

When you were down, I helped you up. 
Even when you said you didn't need me, I 
always gave more than enough.
You were sick & I was your medicine. 
You were hurt & I was your band aid.
You were lost & I was your GPS. 
You called me your One Thing...
That One Thing everyday that made 
everything better.  
I made you, you .
I was made for you.
You couldn't tell me I wasn't yours , because I 
knew you were mine. 
All this love, all this hope & all this faith but 
you still gave me up like I wasn't anything to 
you.  
I was yours,  you're supposed to trust me
Trust that I wouldn't hurt you..
Trust that I had your back..
Trust that I couldn't & wouldn't live without 
you..
Not one breath...
Not one tear...
I was there, not them.
I am numb now but one I will feel this pain & 
it will come hard ! 
But after the pain & tears are gone.....
At least I can say. I tried.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
February 5, 2026 at 5:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Jaquelyn Accoo, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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February 18, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Jaquelyn, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 14, 2014 at 2:18 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jaquelyn- I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 9:35 PM
You should be proud that you were there. That is what love is all about. It is a shame too many people take advantage of the ones that truly care.......Hugs Tim
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February 13, 2014 at 9:29 PM
wow, i can't imagine being without my GPS, Jaquelyn, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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