At Last No Blast

I stepped outdoors to moist air brisk
As fallen leaves in circles whisked
Accompanied by swishing trees
Which symphony could only please
And, aah, no blast of humid heat
Engulfed me in my driver’s seat
I lower the window, mist blows in
Soothes my asthma, fans my skin;
Now the drizzle just began
Nice and cozy in my van
Driving up the street serene
Taking in the autumn scene
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:17 AM
My dear Hannah, I can see why this piece is a winner - it makes me feel as if I am part of the scenery, part of an awesome Autumn painting! Bravo! Hugs. Pandita
Borke Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:12 PM
I consider it my only 'normal' poem
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:31 PM
oh no, Hannah. NOT from LIttle HOuse. ID channel, which shows gruesome true crimes, has done shows on it, not meant for children!!
Borke Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 8:51 PM
I was mistaken. I'm not sure of my original source of the story. But I've seen Laura Ingalls' version in the book Pioneer Girl as of a couple of years ago. I looked up the annotations now; apparently, she wrote it for a children's book, but then did not include it. Copied and pasted excerpt: "One night just about sundown a strange man came riding his horse up to the door on a run. Pa hurried out and they talked a few minutes. Then the man went away as fast as he had come, and Pa came into the house in a hurry. He would not wait for supper, but asked Ma to give him a bite to eat right away, saying he must go. Something horrible had happened at Benders."
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Hannah, how was the Benders written about and for children? On channel ID it says for adults only. Is it somewhere being used as a cautionary tale?
Borke Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 3:43 PM
I thought you knew about it from The Little House books. Most recently, I read about it in Laura Ingall's original manuscript, which offered more details than her brief account in one of the children's series. Pa claimed a narrow escape. (Laura's my idol). Interesting: The manuscript has a recent photo of the cottonwoods Pa planted, so I had fun traveling on the Google Earth app to De Smet to look at the trees.
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:34 PM
I came here in case you do not see my replies to you on my comments. Yes, I am a big fan of true crime and I know all about the Benders. It's a wonder my mind is not that of a serial killer from all the shows I have watched on the topic. Let me find another poem of yours I can read new.
Borke Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Silent One wrote one on fiction. In our recent communication, i let know that I don't do fiction, and the same regarding fiction movies, which leaves me with reality. I recently caught on to Forensic Files and have been watching them one after another. The stories all so shocking and sad. The Benders stands out for being historic and written about for children.
Canerdy Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 1:06 PM
A lovely poem about my favorite season! Congrats, Hannah. Janice
Borke Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 1:10 PM
After repeated edit son this, I finally like it too. Thanks for the compliment. (Just noticed the auto-incorrect, but I'm leaving it)
Kimathi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 6:32 AM
What a fine autumn piece! Congrats Hannah, for your placement in the contest! ;-)
Borke Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 1:09 PM
And congrats on your placement. I left you compliments.
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 7:46 PM
hey I just saw that two for one comment. Wow, that is sure sweet of you to offer that to folks. I only give two if the poems are short. haha. Otherwise I would not have time for my boring chores around the house!
Borke Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 8:53 PM
You poems are sure worth my time. I will find some that I haven't read yet
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:17 PM
I love this, even though I am opposite of you. I am a summer baby, hating the idea of winter coming!! You did a great job here.
Borke Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:24 PM
I forgot about snow and ice... ( I think because Winter on the east coast was mild last year) Dreadful!!
One Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 2:08 PM
I do like the rhymes in this poem Hannah.. Your poem flows very well and I like the imagery created in your words.. Excellent poem..
Borke Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Thanks. I'm starting to like it better.
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