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Contented! My life was perfectly fine. Unaware - I did not know I needed anyone till my eyes met yours, divine; my unsuspecting heart torn, stampeded, beset by tantalizing emotion. The room - you on one side, me the other - unsettled in this reeling commotion, taunted, I feel claustrophobic, smothered. My heart - set ablaze by love. She whose calm was undisturbable is shaken now. Approach I must, your eyes are gentle balm, their light calling beneath your kingly brow. I start your way, you turn t'ward me. I bow before your throne...who was content...till now. Copyright, July 7,2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 7/12/2014 10:55:00 PM
I enjoyed your sonnet - God bless you.
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Date: 7/11/2014 7:49:00 PM
This is beautiful! An awakening found when least expected is a stirring sentiment. Well done!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/12/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Steve, for dropping by and the kind comments.
Date: 7/8/2014 11:05:00 PM
Fay: This is an emotionally powerful poem, beautifully composed. One cannot read it and not be moved (almost made me fall in love all over again). Thank you for an exquisite composition. Paul
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/12/2014 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Paul; your words are really appreciated.
Date: 7/8/2014 9:09:00 AM
:) wow!!!! love this one and so great it is :)
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/8/2014 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Olive...you are just so sweet.
Date: 7/8/2014 8:53:00 AM
What a great testament to faith and a worthy King!
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/8/2014 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, for paying me a visit.

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