At First Glance

At First Glance

I went  to a dance one night 
in the Fall of ‘84
and danced with your friend for awhile 
and than I saw you at first glance
with that olive skinned smile 
your petite lithe shape and full red lips
we met and you spoke to me of
your native land then I took your hand
and we danced on and on
for many suns and many moons
children came in days of wine and brine 
and here I am a vintage man 
so much for wear who still loves you
and will always care
and life has shown as we continue to fill
the time we have left living on the edge
to celebrate that ocassional thread
of luck of money or joy
and that makes everything right
for who knows what occurs on the morrow
to wait for that chance at first glance
to dance again
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Sergi Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Thank you, Lyric Man. I will enjoy the weekend
A  Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 1:40 PM
RALPH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Sergi Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT
Halliday Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 9:42 AM
hanks for recommending this. Enjoyed it.
Haick Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Your words flow effortlessly, Ralph! Thank you for sharing your celebration of life and love...beautiful! I also thank you for reading "Under My Skin" and the encouraging comments. And yes, Cole Porter is still alive through his wonderful music! Have a great weekend. Annalise
Chircop Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Don 't stop dancing Ralph,make it last forever.So beautiful this is.Tnks for stopping by my humble verse.
Callus Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Who said that love at first glance does not exist?! You still carry with you the magical effect that the first glance had on you; may you enjoy many more enchanting suns and moons together! // paul
Sergi Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Hi Paul: Thanks for your comment and the dance continues.
Williams Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:09 AM
Ralph I just love this and it brings back fond memories for me...David
Nehls Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:36 PM
The dance of life with the one you love, It doesn't get much better than that, Ralph. very nice poem my friend..... Robert.
Sergi Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Hi Robert, nice to know you, Thank you for your comment.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 6:57 PM
i like the line many moons and many suns then the 3succeddding lines under it... :) wow sweet sweet one.. :)
Sergi Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Thank you, Olive. Todavia bailamos!
Smith Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 9:09 AM
What a great dance Ralph....dance into the sunset my friend
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