At Daybreak

saffron cloaks the clouds
as apricot streaks the sky . . .
the sun peeking through

May 28, 2022
For A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
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Magdalinos Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 8:07 PM
Hello Andrea Dietrich,lovely images,a wonderful poem!!
Thomas Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Wow... you have always known how to create a mental photograph Andy. Just beautiful.
Baker Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 2:35 PM
I like your daybreak Haiku, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Gauthier Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 8:28 AM
lovely imagery, Andrea ~
Kerr Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 6:26 PM
Andrea, I have just read your observations on “Golden Seaside Haunt.” All I can say is I’m flattered that someone of your stature could find merit in it. “At Daybreak” is an exquisite haiku. It’s a credit to you Howard
Eslinger Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Andrea, you have filled the canvas…then made it wink. Oh, how sweet! LOVE THIS! xox sally
Proxenos Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:16 AM
An absolutely breathtakingly accurate description. so well penned my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer
Walimbe Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:22 AM
Glorious imagery...Have a great day and a wonderful morning, Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 4:38 PM
Lovely imagery, my friend!
Bayles Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Very nice imagery, Andrea.
Bayles Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Very nice imagery, Andrea.
Sands Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Beautiful Andrea :)
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 5:25 AM
Beautiful images of daybreak, Andrea.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 4:58 AM
Glorious imagery of daybreak! Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
Cunningham Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 3:21 AM
You captured the new day well Andrea, hope you are having lovely weekend. Tom
Baker Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 10:45 PM
Ready for another day. :-) Bill
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