At Dawn

when -- at dawn we spotted the cat scooting under the fence who knew--- midday it would be lying on its back lazy-as-content-can-be rubbing up against the sidewalk ---what happened

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Jean Bush

Date: 2/11/2020 2:28:00 PM

A cat that skat but will be back. Hahaha! Good one. Meow Gershon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 3:54:00 PM

Arf, Arf… Ever tune in to 'Animal Stories' with 'Uncle' Larry Lujack and 'Little' Tommy Edwards on WLS-AM 890 out of Chicago in the 1970's and '80's? If not, go for it online. Tell me what you think. Thanks, Jean! Smiles, Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/11/2020 5:41:00 AM

Make no mistake, I coming back as a cat, what a great life they have. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 12:10:00 PM

Tom, I give you my word that in this life, I will never mistake you for a cat! As for what comes next -- me-ow!. LOL. Thanks! :) Gershon

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2020 5:28:00 AM

Sounds like the rain went away and the sun came out (lol) Great imagery, Gershon. -CM

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 12:09:00 PM

There's just no raining on a cat's parade! Thanks, Charlie. :) Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/10/2020 11:45:00 PM

Ohh.. now I know whose cat is that...lol..lazy cat.. Good one..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 12:08:00 PM

Of course, you figured out that it's my wife's cat, as women are naturally lazy. That's why we enterprising husbands have to wrack our brains 24/7 to think of ways to keep them occupied. LOL! Thanks, Jenish

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/10/2020 10:55:00 PM

Hi Gershon, I liked the picture you painted with words. That poor cat wore itself out! Have good evening my friend :-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 12:04:00 PM

Worn out cat? -- No problem: 8 more lives to go! :) Thanks, Alexis! :) Gershon