Sukmawati Komala Poet Dramatic Monologue

At a Glance of Elegy

At a glance of elegy

In a crack of dawn
of a beautiful morn
here is a smile 
that  cross my mind
hugged  me with it’s warm

draped me with a deep yearning
flared up my feeling
with flaming fire

my longing
to see your smile

I blended myself
to your existance
 filled me with
your glorious piece of love
deep in my compassionate ground
to eleminate 
my elegiac mind

how i adored
the moment
when you were there

let me fly unto you
in every dawn
in every morn


sukmawati komala
05 february 2013

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 25, 2013 at 11:22 AM Dear Sukmawati, hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. A very warm Welcome to the Soup. I do believe I shall join the ranks of commenters TO YOUR POETIC Tapestries. You write very well for I feel YOUR LOVE of YOUR life in this POEM. Superb PEN. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Sukmawati Komala January 27, 2014 at 6:28 PM hi HGarvey thank you so very much for your time, supports and courages :) all the best :)

Debbie Duncan March 5, 2013 at 11:14 AM another very nice write Sukmawati xo's ,,,, thank you for reading my haiku six ;} Sukmawati Komala January 27, 2014 at 6:29 PM hi deary Debbie .... so nice to see you... much love and light

Scott Howard Myers The Gypsy King February 9, 2013 at 1:54 PM Nicely done Sukmawati Komala January 27, 2014 at 6:29 PM Hi thank you dear Scott.. appreciate so much :)

Harry Horsman February 9, 2013 at 4:06 AM wow am i glad to see you have posted, sukmawati, this is wonderful poetry... Sukmawati Komala January 27, 2014 at 6:30 PM thank you so much deary Harry... always so happy to see you :) much love and peace :)

Dan Kearley February 6, 2013 at 10:53 PM So beautiful... :o) Where did all you poetry go? I was stopping by to read some again but it is all gone? But I will read what is here.And be happy with that. <3 (o: Sukmawati Komala January 27, 2014 at 6:28 PM hi Thank you deary bro Dan...hope everything is well with you too :) so happy to see your smile :)

Charlie Murder February 6, 2013 at 2:06 PM i have read all of your poems. im glad to see another amazing poet on this website...i am inspired, thank you. with love, izzy