Asunder

My childhood blunder
Moms’ plate shattered asunder
My ball the wonder
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Enjoyed reading your Senryu...That would not be good...Moms can get upset with things like this..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Having had five sons I can relate Robb to your lines... clumsy but luvable boys they are and u have expressed it so well luv.. enjoyed..
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