Astroturf and Snow Part 2 of Trilogy

(Part 2 of Trilogy for My Father)

We stand on cemetery Astroturf
strategically placed to spare us the dread hole,
snow scaling the tops of our shoes
to compete with the ice in our hearts.

The old priest’s boots peek from beneath
a cassock that dangles below his parka.
He jokes gamely about the weather,
reading prayers for my father, a man he never met,
with shaking hands and chattering teeth.
He is a stranger recruited by the others lest someone
discover the shame of self-inflicted death.

Numb in every way it’s possible to be numb,
we await the blows of a grief that suicide denied us
and summon memories that refuse to respond 
while, in their place, we have 
Astroturf
and snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Superb write Mary n big win! Congrats!
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 9:51 PM
Mary, Congrats on your win. ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 9:38 PM
this is amazing, Mary. I can see why you would consider one like this as one of your very best poems. Very INTELLIGENT writing!! the kind that I always prefer, and I shall fave it!!
Rotman Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 10:01 PM
I consider it an honor that you would want to fave it. Thanks for always being honest with me.
A   Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Mary :) Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Poem for One Victim" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Rotman Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Thanks, Linda. I think it is the best poem I've ever written, and you're the first poet to notice it.
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