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Astronomy Pleiades

*Astronomy* - Pleiades

At our galactic core
A massive monster force
Alien black hole spins
Absorbs light - no escape -
All laws of nature cease
Astral stars held in space -
As relativity*

10-6-20
Contest: Pleiades
Sponsor: Joseph May

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Jan Allison

October 12, 2020 at 11:11 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win sam:-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta

October 11, 2020 at 9:05 PM

WOW ! Big Congrats to win. But 'All Nature Laws Cease' is wrong. Black holes are under different laws of Nature. The obey that.

Joseph May

October 11, 2020 at 4:39 PM

Very nicely written Sam, Congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2020 at 12:59 PM

well done, sam. Congrats on this. I found all the topics a bit hard. I can't wait to see what you do for music theme!

Janice Canerdy

October 10, 2020 at 6:07 PM

Excellent job on this complex subject, Sam! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 7, 2020 at 4:13 AM

- An exciting theme ... beautifully written, Sam :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman

October 7, 2020 at 11:59 AM

I really struggled with this one - couldn't get a grip, nothing new, on this theme until I saw a report on the 2020 Nobel Prize winners work on black holes. Bingo! Their work is exciting and rather mind blowing! Many thanks for your wonderful compliment - so appreciated my friend. Glad we are not in a black hole without inspiration! Sending you harvest hugs***

Matt Coffelt

October 7, 2020 at 2:23 AM

As I am a galaxy fan of space myself I enjoyed this piece. Check out my latest I would appreciate your input Thanks

Sam Kauffman

October 7, 2020 at 12:17 PM

Hi Matt! Nice to meet you. The work of the newest Nobel Prize winners inspired me. Thank you for your message! All the best!

Jan Allison

October 7, 2020 at 1:24 AM

fabulous poem Sam, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman

October 7, 2020 at 11:54 AM

Oh thank you Jan. It all came together when I saw a news report on the 2020 winners of the Nobel Prize for their work on black holes. Truly amazing stuff. Hope you are well. ***Happy stargazing*** Harvest hugs!

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