Astronomy Pleiades

Alone with telescope
Astronomy's my rock.
Asteroids and planets
Availed on starry nites.
All moonlit sky above
Always awe inspiring.
Am sometimes overcome.

06/09/2020

for Joseph May's contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on the win, Jean, with Pleiades contest, not easy to make it flow.
Murray Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:52 PM
I know I know....God damn that flow!
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 11:07 AM
excellent poem Jean, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Murray Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 12:45 PM
You too Jan. Maths was never my strength.
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 3:26 AM
- Very well done, Jean :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Hello Sunshine and thank you. I am off this week and would usually be heading somewhere sunny. instead I am confined to barracks and it's somewhat showery. To cheer myself up, I ordered a book on train journeys in Europe. Sometime?
May Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 4:37 PM
Very nicely written Jean, Congrats on your win
Murray Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 2:39 AM
Thank you for the placement Joseph.
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:06 PM
I really like yours with the added personal touch. Congrats on the win.
Murray Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Andrea.
One Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:47 PM
You did this very well
Murray Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 3:22 PM
Thank you Silent.
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