Jeanne Mcgee Poet Pleiades

Astronomy Pleiades

Astronomy holds hearts
   Astonishing matter
      Above the earth, swirling
         As stars collide, men watch
            Asteroids excite them
               Alongside the planets
                  Astronomers study



10-3-2020
Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May 
2nd place

. 7 lines Only
. 6 Syllables per Line
. Put Pleiades after Your Title
. The Subject Chosen will be your Title
. First Word of each line starts with the same letter, Do Not use same word twice.

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Jan Allison October 12, 2020 at 10:56 AM many congrats on your win Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May October 11, 2020 at 4:30 PM Wonderful write Jeanne, Congrats on your win..

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2020 at 2:02 PM very well done, Jeanne; congrats to you

John Watt October 4, 2020 at 10:59 PM Well done, Jeanne. This one seems challenging, but you made it look easy. I think astronomy is going to be the most popular, as who writes poetry about physics or chemistry, haha! We shall see. Best wishes in the contest ~ John