Astronomer

Stone steps
To the top of the tower -
At least a hundred -
In a spiral staircase;
Regularly spaced,
Worn by many feet
And time,
Yet as strong as the day 
They were quarried
Out of local granite.
Taking the polished brass
Handrail, I started to climb;
Eventually, 
Stopping midway
To catch my breath,
And massage my aching calves.
Reaching the telescope at last, I
Smiled and gazed up at the starry sky.

Jack Horne for Linda-Marie’s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 5:00 PM
Magnifcent result Jack congrats..
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Jack. Love Carol
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Congrats to you jack.Very good Acrostic by you.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:13 AM
Congratulations Jack, enjoyed this, well done xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:57 PM
I loved this the first time I saw it. Congrats on your well deserved win, Jack.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 4:10 PM
Congrats Jack on a great win for this tremendous write and entry luv.. and thankxx for your constant support too..
Devonshire Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Awesome acrostic, Jack. I haven't seen this contest, but you provided a compelling image of the astronomer climbing to the top of the tower so he could use the telescope. (I once saw the Horsehead Nebula through a telescope -- awesome site!) Wishing you success in Linda's contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 9:24 AM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Jack. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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February 21, 2012 at 9:00 PM
Jack... Linda, will love your entry... I sure did.,.. Have yourself a good night, always* PD
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 7:56 PM
wow, it's the stairway to the stars contest and what a GREAT idea how you did your entry. I LOVE It. I would like to see the first letter of each line accentuated to show off the acrostic it spells!! Thanks for all your comments today, Jack.
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February 21, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Yes, going to a Planetarium to observe the stars, ah, that would be great..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for all the kind reviews of my work..Sara
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