Astray

I hate to look in the mirror
Afraid to see the truth
My conscience isn't clear
I play fast and loose

I know I changed my identity
When I was chasing my dreams
My face expresses serenity
When I fall into sins

I want to see old Alice
Just look into her eyes
To know what made her callous
First place is her cash prize

I've used to be so cruel
'cause I have learned one phrase 
If you desire something
Dog eat dog is your praise

You know I want to win
You're sure I'll never lose
Forget about the values
Forget about the rules

Suppose, I'm double-faced
I was good, but that's bad
Old Alice knows the secrets
I wish I could forget

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/18/2018 4:36:00 PM
This is great Alisa! The meaning and imagery are portrayed beautifully in your rhyme.
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Alisa Balaieva
Date: 1/19/2018 1:58:00 AM
Thanks James) Who knows, probably one day you'll hear it on the radio))
Date: 1/3/2018 6:02:00 PM
In the world, we live in today... It is difficult to say, this is the way or that is... We each have to find our way...You said it's a dog eat dog affair...You're not wrong...All the best Alisa...Nice to see you back
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Date: 1/19/2018 1:57:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughts, Arturo.
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