Jim Tomcatx Poet Free verse

Astral Ocean Sky

Morphing
sky
blurs into space
floating/dissolving/vibrating
above
a lonely road
a lovely forest

An alternate
world
emanates
from a
quietly rotating sun

Birds
dance through
white/blue/green
waves
of
silent tranquility

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Barbara Peckham August 24, 2021 at 7:55 AM This is beautiful. I love the descriptive words on lines by themselves. It gives them much more impact. . Your first stanza is outstanding.

Jan Allison August 18, 2021 at 12:45 AM the imagery is so beautiful Nick, very well penned, hugs Jan xx Jim Tomcatx August 18, 2021 at 9:56 AM Thanks, Jan!

Barbara Peckham August 17, 2021 at 7:57 PM Lovely poem creating beautiful images, as in comparing the sky to "white, blue-green waves of silent tranquility". Creates a feeling of peace. Jim Tomcatx August 18, 2021 at 9:57 AM I appreciate your kind feedback.