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Astral Ocean Sky

Morphing sky blurs into space floating/dissolving/vibrating above a lonely road a lovely forest An alternate world emanates from a quietly rotating sun Birds dance through white/blue/green waves of silent tranquility

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Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/24/2021 7:55:00 AM

This is beautiful. I love the descriptive words on lines by themselves. It gives them much more impact. . Your first stanza is outstanding.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2021 12:45:00 AM

the imagery is so beautiful Nick, very well penned, hugs Jan xx

njv Tomcatx
Date: 8/18/2021 9:56:00 AM

Thanks, Jan!

Barbara Peckham

Date: 8/17/2021 7:57:00 PM

Lovely poem creating beautiful images, as in comparing the sky to "white, blue-green waves of silent tranquility". Creates a feeling of peace.

njv Tomcatx
Date: 8/18/2021 9:57:00 AM

I appreciate your kind feedback.