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Astral Mystery

In twilight's' iridescent field I walk
On an astral-like  dimension ,   agleam
Where creatures robed in steel vests  wink and blaze--
How entranced am I by their puzzling squawk
Muttering faintly,  lenses white as chalk;
Till my body glides on a mystic  stream
To relish  the enigma of this haze,
A sigh which breaths would never wish to lock :
Then gradually a  Nova descends
In purple mist around a vortex,  such thrill ...
But gold starship wheel on their homeward flight;
That cosmic beings, kind,    part when dusk ends
In the afterglow lingering still...
To tuck my dreams in wondrous joy tonight!


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Fiction - October 2018 Writing Challenge
Sponsored by  Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings
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10/15.2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Nette, a lovely and gentle poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest with this cosmic write, Nette! Best wishes, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:18 PM
I love this; fantastic imagery; had to "fav".
Stevenson Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:12 AM
What a wonderful way to fall asleep. Big smiles, H
Green Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:24 AM
This was gorgeous Nette in an poetic intergalactic way. I could picture this as I read it.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 1:31 AM
- Do you see my star blink, Nette ? - It's both exciting and mysterious ... traveling up to the stars is so far into the future :) - Best wishes in the contest ... happy monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 9:52 PM
E.T. Come back!! Nicely done. Good luck in the contest! ~ gw
Teagan Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 9:49 PM
This is really good, Nette, so many great lines... what a way to drift off to sleep!
Pandit Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 9:49 PM
A journey among stars ..mystical, mysterious, dreamland..you create in your silken words and elegant style..well done, friend. Best for a win, nette.
Goff Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 8:56 PM
dream flight of the soul...nice!
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Perhaps, in dreams moments such as these occur. It seems that way. Your thoughts are magical, mystical and out of this world. :) Brandy
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 5:39 PM
A sweet poem , so smooth to read. A beauty :)
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