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In twilight's' iridescent field I walk On an astral-like dimension , agleam Where creatures robed in steel vests wink and blaze-- How entranced am I by their puzzling squawk Muttering faintly, lenses white as chalk; Till my body glides on a mystic stream To relish the enigma of this haze, A sigh which breaths would never wish to lock : Then gradually a Nova descends In purple mist around a vortex, such thrill ... But gold starship wheel on their homeward flight; That cosmic beings, kind, part when dusk ends In the afterglow lingering still... To tuck my dreams in wondrous joy tonight! .................. Fiction - October 2018 Writing Challenge Sponsored by Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings -------------------- 10/15.2018

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Date: 10/26/2018 9:57:00 AM
Nette, a lovely and gentle poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 10/25/2018 10:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest with this cosmic write, Nette! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 10/16/2018 5:18:00 PM
I love this; fantastic imagery; had to "fav".
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Date: 10/16/2018 3:12:00 AM
What a wonderful way to fall asleep. Big smiles, H
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Date: 10/15/2018 11:24:00 AM
This was gorgeous Nette in an poetic intergalactic way. I could picture this as I read it.
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Date: 10/15/2018 1:31:00 AM
- Do you see my star blink, Nette ? - It's both exciting and mysterious ... traveling up to the stars is so far into the future :) - Best wishes in the contest ... happy monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2018 9:52:00 PM
E.T. Come back!! Nicely done. Good luck in the contest! ~ gw
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Date: 10/14/2018 9:49:00 PM
This is really good, Nette, so many great lines... what a way to drift off to sleep!
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Date: 10/14/2018 9:49:00 PM
A journey among stars ..mystical, mysterious, dreamland..you create in your silken words and elegant style..well done, friend. Best for a win, nette.
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Date: 10/14/2018 8:56:00 PM
dream flight of the soul...nice!
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Date: 10/14/2018 7:46:00 PM
Perhaps, in dreams moments such as these occur. It seems that way. Your thoughts are magical, mystical and out of this world. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/14/2018 5:39:00 PM
A sweet poem , so smooth to read. A beauty :)
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