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Astral Love

Your love surrounds me in colors
Passion and desire call me to you
I can not see you, yet I know you are there
Together on a blanket of spiraling color we meet
High above the Earth, in a realm unlike the one we have known
You touch me and fire rages within me
Embers become flames as memories flood over me like water
Though not a physical touch your fingertips glide over me, tracing my soul
I gasp in delight and a breath escapes me, the air of life
Like gold or silver your eyes shine upon me
I see your spirit intertwined with mine
We are free, we are energy



Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

Copyright © Lena Townsend | Year Posted 2009

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Cesar Cantu Date: 5/24/2009 7:26:00 PM This poem owns!!@.@ Awsome awsome awsome!! Just like Bowie's Space Oddity jojjo could not avoid the music in the background of my forhead, yep yep jojojojo really really unique experience of expressing love, =) thanks for sharing, yeah!!! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/22/2009 3:09:00 PM so passionate and deep-wonderful Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/20/2009 2:47:00 PM Dear Lolita,This Great POEM makes one think is this carnal LOVE or Spiritual LOVE One of mankind or one of GOD Superbly done Very Inspirational ALWAYS YOURS...HG Login to Reply

David Smalling Date: 4/17/2009 2:28:00 PM What a precious, beautiful way to be ... how cuddly, how cute ... mmm, let me just say the poem pulls me in and quit. Login to Reply

Jane Bowen Date: 4/13/2009 11:02:00 AM Beautifully written and alouring. You have done it once again friend. THis poem is hot hot hot ...Steamy baby! It's full of beautiful description only a writer would be able to write like! You took me on a fantasy realm unlike the world I know....wowsers girl...that's some good stuff. Take care and keep up the creations...you're going to make us all envious of your lover and you...he he he...naaa you just keep loving baby doll, What a powerful write here Lolita...thanks for the inspiration!:) Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 4/11/2009 1:29:00 PM "Hello Again Dear Gifted, Precious and Lovely Lena Townsend!!!":):)~I sincerely hope that You are doing well dear lady~and that life is treating You wonderfully!!?:):)~I also wanted to stop by to wish "You and Your Loves A Blessed and Beautiful Easter Dear~With Warmth and Love Always, John!!!":):) Bye ~ Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 4/10/2009 7:49:00 AM Thank you for your blog comments today Lolita.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 4/9/2009 2:48:00 PM ....And as I refered unto while I read this beautifully color and image laced write of Yours once again~unto myself; these sentiments of Yours, could be aimed at an individual, a whole, nature and all, or, "God Himself!!?":):)~Either or, it is a very well crafted, creative and "Beautiful Write~Straight From Your Brightened Heart & Soul Dear Lena!!!":):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!":):) Happy Easter Dear ~ Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 4/9/2009 2:41:00 PM Ahh, the many different possibilities to this wonderful writes object of "Your Love!?":):)~"Hello My Gifted & Beautiful Friend Lena Townsend!!!":):)~I truly hope that "Your Easter Week" is going absolutely wonderfully for Yourself dear lady!!!?:):)....cont.... Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 4/9/2009 2:14:00 PM really a lot of fun to read imaginative work like this, Lolita, the reader can just float away on your surreal images of possibilities, wow! one of my fav's of yours, jmg Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/9/2009 12:41:00 PM The magnificent "energy" of love soars to great heights in this incredible poem. The impact is as magical as the Milky Way! Great poem, Lolita! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 4/9/2009 10:34:00 AM Very imaginative ying yang choreography of thoughts ... a sweet seductive write. Login to Reply

John Weber Date: 4/9/2009 9:22:00 AM Passion forms a whole new element to be reckoned with here, Lolita! Superlative word selection and pacing! Warm regards, John. Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 4/9/2009 8:03:00 AM COOL! Sensual and passionate... true love transcends everything. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/9/2009 7:19:00 AM Ah, Lolita after my own heart. This sounds much like a wonderful meditation or contemplation, though more passionate than some. Great imagination. Like, imagination is what keeps my world together. Love, daver Login to Reply

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 4/9/2009 6:19:00 AM mmm. yummy. a delightful piece to read again, well done Lolita. Happy Easter and thanks for your lovely thoughts and comments...Anna-Marie. Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 4/9/2009 1:48:00 AM Well written Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.Easter blessings to you & yours Login to Reply

Aleera De La Keur Date: 4/9/2009 1:45:00 AM I like how you the elements of Earth while writing this, I'm not sure if it was on purpose or not, but interesting quite the same. Loved it....Aleera Login to Reply

Sebastian Aaron Baez Date: 4/8/2009 3:03:00 PM Impressive and inspirational, passionate and everlasting words, I love it! Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 4/8/2009 10:28:00 AM Wow. This is otherworldly sensual and very beautiful. An awesome dream like perspective on possibilities. Love it! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 4/8/2009 9:44:00 AM Nice. It made me think of free spirits on a magic carpet ride flying above the earth in dreamy love. You have painted a beautiful picture here with words. Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 4/8/2009 9:18:00 AM This is very beautiful..love the passion that blaze in the write..done in a very sexy, sweet manner.. very classy write. Login to Reply