Astoundingly Sad

astoundingly sad lone chirp in the willow tree lifeless bird below

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2019 10:36:00 AM

this paints a tragic little picture, Caren. I am here to catch up with Soup before I leave for the funeral in WA. Hope to see you by Saturday or Sunday and read more of your poems. Let me see one more right now.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 6:59:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I am sad you have a funeral. I hope that you are flying; my prayers go with you my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/25/2019 8:40:00 AM

Shame poor bird - unfortunately our three Labs, leave many feathers through out our garden! Hugs, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 9:53:00 AM

My cat gets her share here also.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/25/2019 5:06:00 AM

Oh! not lifeless; but you for me the great......//

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 9:54:00 AM

Yes, and lifeless does not mean the bird's soul has died. Right?

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/24/2019 9:20:00 PM

A bit grisly -- but I like it. The image resonates. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 9:54:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. I am in a grisly mood. Got my $20,000 bill from 4 days in the hospital yesterday. Luckily I think we are only going to have to pay $800 of it.