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astoundingly sad lone chirp in the willow tree lifeless bird below

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Date: 6/25/2019 10:36:00 AM
this paints a tragic little picture, Caren. I am here to catch up with Soup before I leave for the funeral in WA. Hope to see you by Saturday or Sunday and read more of your poems. Let me see one more right now.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I am sad you have a funeral. I hope that you are flying; my prayers go with you my friend.
Date: 6/25/2019 8:40:00 AM
Shame poor bird - unfortunately our three Labs, leave many feathers through out our garden! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 9:53:00 AM
My cat gets her share here also.
Date: 6/25/2019 5:06:00 AM
Oh! not lifeless; but you for me the great......//
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 9:54:00 AM
Yes, and lifeless does not mean the bird's soul has died. Right?
Date: 6/24/2019 9:20:00 PM
A bit grisly -- but I like it. The image resonates. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/25/2019 9:54:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I am in a grisly mood. Got my $20,000 bill from 4 days in the hospital yesterday. Luckily I think we are only going to have to pay $800 of it.