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An old flower tree Crushed under a tornado Sadly hums a bee **** Sheer night kills a day Pearl drops flood many a cheek Life appears all Greek **** Here stood the old oak A haven for hundred birds Well, where did it go? **** You are just a brook No right to turn back and look Move on straight or crook **** Still you write letters I am away from fetters Bees hum merrily ___________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/1/2016 11:33:00 PM
I do love Haiku, Probir, and you do them so well. Full of colour, and they speak on many levels. Keep up the good work. Regards, Viv
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/1/2016 11:55:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 2/1/2016 4:40:00 PM
Very nice set . My favorite-- "Here stood the old oak A haven for hundred birds Well, where did it go?" A7
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Date: 2/1/2016 11:53:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 2/1/2016 2:33:00 PM
well done,,, love the first haiku. skat
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/1/2016 11:54:00 PM
Thanks and thanks and thanks again...