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Astonishing the Senses

On a pristine stretch of solid sand its serene surface bathed in lazy sunshine, I long to hop on a boat, let my mind stop thinking, let it rest in contemplation and wonder how I can ever stop life moving on. I stare at nothing, not forgetting still remembering old memories. Intoxicated and seduced, I breathe in a clear landscape stirred to life by a summer wind - such is nature's orchestrations, scrub the world clean of chaos, astonishing the senses @jjote 03/28/16 posted Sent from my iPad

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Date: 5/6/2016 9:29:00 AM
Josefina C, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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Josefina Costales
Date: 6/9/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. Sorry for my late post. Been away and have not felt "inspired" lately.
Date: 4/24/2016 11:31:00 AM
Josefina Costales, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*"
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Date: 6/9/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Linda, appreciate your reply, been so lazy writing lately, and as my poem said it, life for me seemed not to be moving on. Hope to catch up soon. LUV to you too

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