Assessment

I’m not connected
Neither am I happy
And so
Words are like forgotten junk
Like happy
Like connected
Like ice scuffed
Unforgiving cold beneath
Heavens above

Breathing

©davidbyrne jan 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 23, 2013 at 9:19 PM
David, wow... to feel not connected. I think this is a bug. I woke up this morning not feeling a thing. I voided the meaning of communication. I was the WALL... well I will not go on about me.. LOL... I got shook out of it with a friendly slap... enjoyed...LINDA
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