Aspens Quake: Hexsonnetta

The copse of aspens quake.
Horses graze and cows laze
as languid summer splays
emeralds in its wake,
low fields to overtake
the prospect's cyan glaze.

Immutable the sun
in lambent saffron drape
above the lucid scape
contemplates the glisten,
auscultates the paean,
the whispering of crepe

as runes the leaves impart
to dulcify the heart.*

*Hexsonnetta is a form invented by Andrea Dietrich

1/7/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Literally brilliant. Literally emeralds, glaze and glisten. Fav. And my late congrats for the gold that glitters less than this sonnet.
Cozart Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Thanks very much, Kurt.
Barden Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:47 AM
Congrats on your win, Dale - very well done, my friend ... blessings to you! :-)
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Thanks much, Greg!
Mccall Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:51 AM
What a great sonnet Dale and congratulations on first place.
Cozart Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, sir.
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Great form Dale, lovely write, congratulations...
Cozart Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Woodward Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Congratulations! You create a lovely image with your sonnet.
Cozart Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 8:30 AM
Thanks, Laurie!
Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Congrats, Dale, on your fine win.
Canerdy Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Beautiful, Dale! Congrats on your top win. Janice
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thanks, Janice!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 6:08 PM
wow, Dale. I don't see many done in my form THIS beautifully. I'm so glad Connie drew my attention to this one. Splendid imagery in the confines of this tiny sonnet form. FAVE
Cozart Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I hoped you'd like it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 11:49 AM
I recognized this form right away as Andrea's. I couldn't begin to write one this wonderful Dale. I am sure this poem will delight her! Bravo! : )
Cozart Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Thanks so much, Connie!
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:25 AM
An interesting sonnet, do not think I have seen anything like this.. came to read you after noticing your name on July morning's blog...
Cozart Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:36 AM
It was invented by Andrea Dietrich. Because I entered a contest I took the credit off so it wouldn't be taken as an identifying mark. Once the contest is over I'll put the reference back.
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