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Asparagus

Delicate subtle green stem So unusual The emerald of the crop Little magic wands Stacked upon my plate Dare I salt? No!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/25/2013 6:09:00 PM
yum my favorite veggie...what a delicious poem...congrats on having it featured :)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/29/2013 2:31:00 AM
Mine, too, Sandra!
Date: 8/25/2013 10:52:00 AM
Yummy....congratulations on your featured poem Jeremy
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/29/2013 2:31:00 AM
I know, I love asparagus. Asparagus needs to be featured every day everywhere.
Date: 8/25/2013 7:55:00 AM
Hi Jeremy ,CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * Linda
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/29/2013 2:30:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/24/2013 6:34:00 PM
Jeremy, congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/29/2013 2:30:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 5/26/2012 3:00:00 AM
and then the trip to the bathroom. ehh... whats that? good god!!! WHATS THAT SMELL!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 5/27/2012 8:35:00 PM
Gross.
Date: 5/21/2012 10:07:00 AM
i like asparagus and i like your poem about it! nice one! (no salt needed!)
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Date: 5/21/2012 4:55:00 AM
Nice one
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