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Asparagus shoots, tender, and green~ killed By late winter's artic blast and hoar's frost All that intensive work, tossed aside, lost The natural world rode in so skilled Though maybe there are some shoots like love's thrill In poor soil, lies quietly hidden tossed Like an uncultivated field with plow uncrossed Once worked, planted its destiny fulfilled Those darkened stems once contained hope The promise everlasting that slowly faded One hug, one kiss would be the saving grace Stir asparagus, send up telescopes Withered heart~ beat once again unaided Fern fill the plate and flower vase

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/16/2018 1:00:00 PM
a cleverly written piece, my friend
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Date: 3/13/2018 10:58:00 AM
A great metaphor Sara, well done...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2018 10:30:00 AM
Charlie, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Your comments are appreciated. Dependable asparagus we hope just started the plants this will be two years ago., Not suppose harvest until the third year. Sara
Date: 3/13/2018 7:49:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2018 10:29:00 AM
Ravi, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate your continued support by reading my work. Sara
Date: 3/12/2018 12:02:00 PM
Nicely done Sara, the rhyme works well now and I like your message as well.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2018 2:02:00 PM
Craig, Thanks for dropping by and taking a second look. Sara
Date: 3/11/2018 1:53:00 PM
A clever metaphor for love Sara, the analogy fits well!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/11/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Craig. Here's hoping spring with edible ferns grow. Sara

Book: Shattered Sighs