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Asleep-Awake

Asleep
Exhausted, restless
Dreaming, snorting, turning
Sunlight, alarm, shower, coffee
Stretching, yawning, changing
Irritable, confused
Awake

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Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2017 at 6:27 PM

this is a GREAT example of this little form you have done back here. I kept clicking and clicking and finally found a poem I had not seen back from 2014!!

John Michaels

June 6, 2017 at 1:31 AM

Wow, I'm flattered that you've read all my stuff and impressed you remembered which ones you'd already seen! Thanks for the kind comments about one of my early pieces (not just published, but written in my early poet days). Kind regards, John.

Lisa Ricci

April 27, 2017 at 4:28 AM

Hello John Good Morning. Wonderful contrast between the two. I chuckle and smile at the irritable and confused. Isn't that the truth (lol). Have a wonderful day. Well done

John Michaels

June 6, 2017 at 1:31 AM

Thanks so much, Lisa. Always grateful for your comments. Regards, John.