Asleep

Asleep You are, I sit and I wait, Your breath resembles T’ sound of ocean waves, Like petals of iris, shreds of cloudless sky, Your eyes' deepest blue makes me mesmerized, ‘Till my Lilly opens to the morning heat I will sit and wait, But you’re still Asleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 19, 2013 at 12:10 PM
Miroslaw, wow... .....very deep...LINDA
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December 13, 2013 at 4:44 AM
hi Mioslaw, congratulations on your win xx
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December 13, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats, Miroslow
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December 12, 2013 at 12:35 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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