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Asking For More

Vivacious, Vibrating, Vibrant That's what I'm asking for I'll see what I can do... Vim, Vigor, Vinegar and V-r-o-o-o-m Ya know what I mean? That's asking too much I was afraid of that...

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Date: 1/28/2023 1:14:00 PM
A creative write. Enjoy your day.............
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/28/2023 7:36:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Happy weekend to you! ~ Gershon
Date: 1/27/2023 3:06:00 PM
Oliver Twist?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/28/2023 7:29:00 PM
Oh, absolutely. I was absolutely thinking of that wonderfully written chapter (and well-staged movie scene, as well) where Oliver 'dares' to ask for more. Marvelous, Shirley!
Date: 1/26/2023 7:44:00 PM
Hahaha!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/28/2023 7:38:00 PM
Keep smiling and laughing, Seeker! Joy and Laughter, Gershon

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