Gershon Wolf Poet Alliteration

Asking For More

Vivacious, Vibrating, Vibrant
    That's what I'm asking for  
  I'll see what I can do...

  Vim, Vigor, Vinegar and V-r-o-o-o-m
    Ya know what I mean?
  That's asking too much

    I was afraid of that...

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Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 1:14 PM A creative write. Enjoy your day............. Gershon Wolf January 28, 2023 at 7:36 PM Thank you, Paula. Happy weekend to you! ~ Gershon

Shirley Hawkins January 27, 2023 at 3:06 PM Oliver Twist? Gershon Wolf January 28, 2023 at 7:29 PM Oh, absolutely. I was absolutely thinking of that wonderfully written chapter (and well-staged movie scene, as well) where Oliver 'dares' to ask for more. Marvelous, Shirley!

Unseeking Seeker January 26, 2023 at 7:44 PM Hahaha! Gershon Wolf January 28, 2023 at 7:38 PM Keep smiling and laughing, Seeker! Joy and Laughter, Gershon