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Asking For a Chance

Every moment that passes by Another teardrop another sigh He cries out to all he can They don’t listen or understand He kept silent for many years Now his heart is filled with fear He’s seventeen and his own man He wants to live he knows he can His life right now is filled with grief His time with family is very brief He wishes and hopes for something new He has many dreams but lives very few The system abandoned him in his need The Lord has found him on his knees He will be rescued and his hurt relieved He will be saved since he believes It’s hard to keep faith in times of pain He continues on through the strain To see this young man at a glance You know he’s asking for a chance Do not ignore him or pass him by Do not ignore this poor boys cry If you see him take your time Hear his plea ignore the lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/15/2009 5:09:00 PM
I like the rhyming pattern in this poem. It also flows with such passion for a soul crying out for help. One which should be heard. If you would also like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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Date: 3/1/2009 9:16:00 PM
a beautiful line with such truth for so many "Hear his plea ignore the lies' this piece has a history and future for all to see and live a marvelous write,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/5/2009 6:21:00 PM
Lena - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:39:00 PM
Very beautiful, God answers prayers, never give up hope...Take your burdens to the lord, lean on him and he will see you through..Great write..Congratulations on your lovely piece being featured this week.God bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:17:00 AM
This was exceptional. Systemized kids have little hope unless they do it on their own. Faith plays a big part as well as finding one or two people that are supportive. "Asking For A Chance" is a well deserved featured write. When you're dealing with adolescents, the best rule is to NEVER, NEVER, NEVER give up. Too many people quit on super kids when the going is tough. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:58:00 PM
In faith and with prayer we get through the tough times. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2009 2:00:00 PM
The angst of the teenager ... wonder why so many have such pain and others just breeze through the years? Great write here, Lena and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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