Asking For a Chance

Every moment that passes by
Another teardrop another sigh
He cries out to all he can
They don’t listen or understand

He kept silent for many years
Now his heart is filled with fear
He’s seventeen and his own man
He wants to live he knows he can

His life right now is filled with grief
His time with family is very brief
He wishes and hopes for something new
He has many dreams but lives very few

The system abandoned him in his need
The Lord has found him on his knees
He will be rescued and his hurt relieved
He will be saved since he believes

It’s hard to keep faith in times of pain
He continues on through the strain
To see this young man at a glance
You know he’s asking for a chance

Do not ignore him or pass him by
Do not ignore this poor boys cry
If you see him take your time
Hear his plea ignore the lies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Spence Sr Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 5:09 PM
I like the rhyming pattern in this poem. It also flows with such passion for a soul crying out for help. One which should be heard. If you would also like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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March 1, 2009 at 9:16 PM
a beautiful line with such truth for so many "Hear his plea ignore the lies' this piece has a history and future for all to see and live a marvelous write,,,blessings..Cecil
Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Lena - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Ehigiator Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 10:39 PM
Very beautiful, God answers prayers, never give up hope...Take your burdens to the lord, lean on him and he will see you through..Great write..Congratulations on your lovely piece being featured this week.God bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
Brown Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 5:17 AM
This was exceptional. Systemized kids have little hope unless they do it on their own. Faith plays a big part as well as finding one or two people that are supportive. "Asking For A Chance" is a well deserved featured write. When you're dealing with adolescents, the best rule is to NEVER, NEVER, NEVER give up. Too many people quit on super kids when the going is tough. Vince
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February 1, 2009 at 2:58 PM
In faith and with prayer we get through the tough times. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured! Keep on writing. Karen
Mason Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 2:00 PM
The angst of the teenager ... wonder why so many have such pain and others just breeze through the years? Great write here, Lena and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!
Winter Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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