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Asking Beauty For A Date

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*Days ere the prom: Asking Beauty For A Date
Beauty arrives just ere of her and undresses in languishing thoughts as words fumble from within the bold who is too weak as the flower sweetens ere them e'er so oft the sword of Damocles hangs lest one express earnestly their pulsating words venerated from their heart spilling in her labyrinth fulfilling her soul with aspiring desires of twain hearts being in oneness acknowledges her intent with subtle nuances and simple, "Yes." 2020 February 29 Howmanysyllables; 5-7-7-5-7-7-5-5-7-5-7-7-5-7-7-5-5-7 = 110 syllables total

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