Asking

I asked God why He didn't answer Time passed I very well remember Then one day In a still small voice He said to me Why not

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Logan Saucillo

Date: 11/6/2009 1:17:00 PM

one word. amazing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/25/2009 3:16:00 AM

Great one, dear, Sara!!! Love, Dane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2009 3:24:00 PM

thankxxx Sara.. I had to enter a Haiku contest and this was my first attempt.. somber but I did place 2nd.. Your poem Asking reflects the inner questions we all have ... but God has all the answers and in our life's journey we learn them all eventually. good writing to make one think... Linda-Marie

James Fraser

Date: 10/23/2009 5:22:00 AM

Nice shortie Sara >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/22/2009 7:40:00 PM

thanks for sharing, why not?

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/22/2009 1:48:00 PM

Beautifully poised...poetess. Wishing all the best and am looking forward to reading more of your thrilling poetry.

John Freeman

Date: 10/22/2009 9:44:00 AM

God(Love) always answers to them that will wait and hear his answer, and receive it as it is, not refusing it because it was not what they wanted to hear. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 10/22/2009 8:52:00 AM

This is nice...It's always good to get your comments...in "A Lonely Road" you said, "those crossroads have choices" Of course they do..that's why I ended the piece the way I did..He He Yes I will choose the right one because I have life's terrible experiences on my side my friend...Jimmy

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/22/2009 8:23:00 AM

Very good write, Sara. This call for some deep thinking. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! Peace and love, Audrey

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/22/2009 7:59:00 AM

wrong!

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/22/2009 7:46:00 AM

God never answers arrogance. he might run out of lightening bolts if he did. but its a hard thing for him to make your prayer to fit in his ending. and that take an unblievable amount of time to get some of those thinmgs in there. john