Ask Me How It Feels

my man
melting and kissing
this Hagar woman
I sat on his lap.
And please, let it be fast,
before my heart dries out,
for this time
you pushed it too far,
my womb is just as good, 
my love is even better,
it should have been me,
damn you God, damn me.

The ground will soundly sleep
under the steps 
of our empty souls.

Make me unwise:
show me the dagger
and ask me how it feels.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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July 16, 2011 at 2:27 AM
great job in this poetical art...fantastic feeling portrayed..junjun.*-*
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