Ashes to Ashes
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Ashes to Ashes, is a dark comic verse of 4 rhyming couplets with pantoum, alliteration, in octosyllabic meter and an envoi. Written in 60 words and centered for aesthetic symmetry. Image Photo by Josehf Lloyd Murchison.
Ashes to Ashes
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
here goes my goldfish, with one flush.
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
here goes my gerbil, with one flush.
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
here goes my turtle, with one flush.
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
here goes my loved one, with one flush.
Honey, stop him, the cat won’t fit.
By
Josehf Lloyd Murchison
Copyright © Josehf Murchison | Year Posted 2024
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