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Ashes of Hope

I drifted like a ghost Among the blackened ruins. Trying to remember laughter, And the joy once here, All I see now are The darkened stones. Charred remains mocking The majesty of the past, And I wonder how Such destruction exists. No colors, only shades, As though it’s all Dressed for mourning. Yet…what is that? There, amid the ruin, And the fallen glory, In the darkness And piled up ashes, There is a small green Plant. A flower, to be exact, Half buried but Still so determined. A growing hope In a harsh, dark place, Saying “I’m still alive, Despite the destruction.” New life, new hope. New dreams, A rebuilding on top Of broken foundations.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/12/2013 12:31:00 PM
I like how you use a struggling flower as way to symbol hope, awesome poem!
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Karlin K. Jensen
Date: 3/12/2013 8:13:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/11/2013 8:52:00 PM
My wife and I were speaking of the oat straw grass sprouts appearing at the edge of the snow covered bale. Mother Earth is fantastic Thanks for the descriptive narration from your imagination......fantastic.
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