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Ashes and Phoenix Rise

Written: December 6, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Hilo Poet **************** Oh, Nero, spearhead of the wicked fate, With insane fire, you lit the Roman gate, Your lyre produced a wild, melodic grate, Your greed is burning on your twisted trait, As the power bursts with your wicked hate, Flames rise, and all that is left will abate, In the gloom, a flare of faith on the slate, A phoenix will rise from dust, may elate, And Rome shall breathe again, fresh and ornate. RZ & HMS: 10 syllables per 9 lines
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 5:35 PM
outstanding and powerful monorhyme, dear Sotto. My distain for Nero is even stronger now. Best wishes with this contest entry.
Boles Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 5:35 PM
You scorched this Dictator, Poet Sotto! In the end, the murderers will pay. A powerful monorhyme indeed... anselmo boles
Hind Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 3:03 PM
Deep and scathing imagery- he is not a fav of many that's for sure
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